Haiku revised, thanks to Red Pine

The great Red Pine/Bill Porter suggested that yesterday’s haiku worked better backwards. He’s right.


on altar

flame circumambulates candle—

summer room, strobing fan

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Published on August 18, 2016 16:35
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