Adrian's Lost Chapter

As promised, the reward for the Bloodlines Challenge is live! Before I get to it, I want to quickly go over something I've tried to explain but that still has people confused.

Originally, Bloodlines was going to be told from a few different characters' points of view. It was going to be in third person (the "he" voice) and alternate characters each chapter. A few chapters in, problems were emerging from this (you've got to trust me on that!). I ended up starting completely over and simply doing the entire book from just Sydney's point of view in first person (the "I" voice). The all-Sydney version is what you're going to get when the book hits the shelves August 23. Hope that clears things up!

The reward for the Bloodlines Challenge is a glimpse at the original scrapped first chapter, which is told from Adrian's POV. It's fun, but again trust me when I say the momentum didn't last much longer in that version of the book! But, as a thank you for everyone's amazing support and because I know everyone's secretly dying to get inside Adrian's head, I give you:

The original beginning of Bloodlines, as told by Adrian

Hope you enjoy it, and THANK YOU again for all of your amazing support! If you still have Bloodlines questions or want to read what is now the "real" first chapter of Bloodlines, head over to my website.

ADDENDUM: There are a couple of quirky things going on with the chapter's formatting. iPad (and some phone) viewers are having trouble reading it--it comes out gibberishy. Tech types are hoping to fix this, but if possible, try another computer. Also, when the chapter was formatted, it looks like someone's spellcheck "fixed" Dimitri to the more traditional "Dmitri" spelling. Don't worry, I haven't changed his name! :)
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Published on August 03, 2011 18:21
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message 1: by Izzy (new)

Izzy oh adrian, i really want to now find out how the meeting went seeing as i haven't read bloodlines any way.
it was amazing!!!


message 2: by Gigi (new)

Gigi The first chapter looked amazing, I really did want to read the chapter with the dinner but I understand how hard it can be to write in a certain way if you just don't feel it anymore.


message 3: by Saturnus (new)

Saturnus ooh gosh i want more!!!!


message 4: by Fatiange (new)

Fatiange Oh God, poor Adrian. I hate to see him suffering! But this chapter was FANTASTIC. And I'd love to now what happened at that dinner.


message 5: by Darlene (new)

Darlene It's not working for me :'(


message 6: by Joanna (new)

Joanna Omg.I loved it.I wish all the book was on Adrain,but i no for sure the rest of the book will be amazing.Cant wait....I need more...


message 7: by Darlene (new)

Darlene Oh, I figured out the link doesn't work for mobile devices so get off your iPod if you wanna read this & get to a laptop or something


message 8: by [deleted user] (new)

GAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH THAT WAS SOOO GOOD!!!
My heart was breaking all over again when Adrian was describing Rose and Dmitri together!!
I wish there were Adrian Chapters in Bloodlines!!
Jill & Adrian together are funny :)


message 9: by Stephanie (new)

Stephanie i wish she could post the "dinner" chapter!
I loved this chapter!


message 10: by Kayley (new)

Kayley It's all in gibberish for me. I soooo want to read it :(((


message 11: by Darlene (new)

Darlene Kayley wrote: "It's all in gibberish for me. I soooo want to read it :((("

You're using a mobile device. You have to use a laptop/computer


message 12: by Kayley (new)

Kayley Darlene wrote: "Kayley wrote: "It's all in gibberish for me. I soooo want to read it :((("

You're using a mobile device. You have to use a laptop/computer"


Thank you.


message 13: by Yal (new)

Yal adrian!
i wanna read more!!!
i wish you could post the next couple of chapters, i am dying of curiosity !!


message 14: by [deleted user] (new)

Moremoremoremore! :D


message 15: by Layjane (new)

Layjane sanchez I would rather read the book in his perspective! Even tho I like sydneys too!! Idk I just like how he sounds better! N it would be awesome to know what he is thinking when he is falling in lovw with Sidney! N we would get to know what exactly he notices about her you know!:) I just love Adrian! I mean I love that Rose ended up with my Dimka but I think Adrian was an awesome candidate and that he so deserves to be happy!!!!:) n I also want to know how he gets over Rose!:( which is sad!!:(


message 16: by Selda (new)

Selda Mert It was soo good I wish you'd write a whole book on Adrians Perspective. Please writ a whole book from his life I'd honestly love you forever. it's pretty amazing reading from his perspective because he's a Spirit User and we'd get abit of a taste on what it would be like to have Spirit as a power ?


message 17: by aavani (new)

aavani well, since i am a die hard fan of adrian ivashkov, i am willingly and exictedly in love with the adrian perspective....sigh...why cant he come outta d book and stay at my place or why cant i get into the book n b sydney?? sigh..life is sooooooooooooooooo unfair =:(


message 18: by Mechelle (new)

Mechelle I liked the Adrian POV. And I love Dimitri and Rose. this was a very insightful charpter.


message 19: by Izzy (new)

Izzy well I'm not going to survive this,as the heartache which will undoubtedly happen if shadowkissed is anything to go by will be torturous.


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