Logan, Thank You's and other such things.

It's been a week since 'More Than This' has been live on Amazon. Only one week. I can't believe it!


I'm so blown away by the response that it's had. I sent out Arcs as a way to see whether people liked the story as much as I did, I had no intention of publishing it. Not until the first ten reviews i got were 4's and 5's, asking for more of 'The Logan'.


I love reading all the reviews - even the negative-ish ones. Although, I haven't come across any that say they hate it. I'm dreading that day!


As a new author, and this being my debut novel, I try to take in every review and what is being said. I'd be completely stupid not to take every piece of criticism or advice as constructive and do something about it.


Legit! - LOL! Shout out to Jessica *The good gif witch* for your review, because if it weren't for you, I'd still have a book on amazon that has waaaay to many 'legits'. I also removed a bunch of slang i honestly didn't even know that I had written. Thanks to technology everything is shortened, and my fingers auto type them. And if your one of the ones that got the book early on, I'm sorry! I'm sorry! I'm sorry!


As far as editing and grammar go, yes, i'm getting it looked at. Thank you for letting me know, and I truly hope that it didn't deter you from enjoying the actual story too much.


I LOVE reading the mixed reviews.. and the status's as people are reading. The feedback is so mixed and i love it. LOVE IT!


I love that at some point in the book I wrote something that actually made you want to share it, with me, or other readers, or just yourself. Even if you hate it. It's something.


LOGAN - He's coming (not like that, don't be dirty) I'm still writing his story and I don't want to rush it. I don't want to be one of those authors that rush stories and release a 150 page companion novel because it's hyped and people will buy it. I want to write Logan's story and I want it to mean something.


Lastly, I want to say Thank You to every single person that has read, rated, reviewed, loved, hated, legit wanted to pull their hair out, everything. Just Thank YOU! 


There's also a handful of ladies that read it around the same time, that loved it enough and told all their friends about it. I'm not going to name names but you know who you are and i'm so glad this fairytale and Jake effing Andrews made you laugh/smile/swoon/cry.


A special thank you to Alexis *RealityBites! Let's Get Lost!* - without your rave review and ability to pimp out my book, I would still be annoyed waking up in the morning, looking at my email or GR and finding not much feedback.




Does anyone know if this guy ^^ is real life? Because if he is... LICK!!!
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message 1: by Kristy (new)

Kristy I LOVED this book!!! :)


message 2: by Jay (new)

Jay McLean Thank you so much Kristy! That means so much!


message 3: by Jessica (new)

Jessica I am soooooo looking forward to Logan's book. I love when I fall in love not only with the lead characters but with the supporting cast as well. He was definitely one that left me scratching my head because I had NO idea he felt that way.
Great book!


message 4: by Jay (new)

Jay McLean Thanks Jessica. I'm glad you enjoyed it! I fell in love with Logan too. Him and drunk Lucy!


message 5: by Jess-i-ca (last edited Jul 18, 2013 07:00PM) (new)

Jess-i-ca Glad I could help ya out! I can't wait for Logan's book. I will be patient and only harass you daily weekly. :)

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Alexis *Reality Bites* @ Jessica**The Good Gif Witch** LMAO!You crack me up!!! Loves the gifs!!!!


message 8: by Mira (new)

Mira Sooooo legit!! lol. Still swooning over Jake and Logan!!Really Jay, Thank youuuu so much for making this book! You're amaaaaaaazing and I'm singing it at the top of my lungs!! Can't wait! Can't wait! Can't wait!


message 9: by Lauren (new)

Lauren I loved this book! can't wait for Logan's story. and I really hope we get to see more of Kayla and Jake


message 10: by Jay (new)

Jay McLean Thanks Lauren. There's a teaser to Logan's story on my fb page (link in one of the blog posts). I'm so happy you enjoyed it!


message 11: by Chrissy (new)

Chrissy T Ok, I just finished your book and had to know everything about you immediately, and I was lead here. I am seriously in love with Jake! If it wasn't 3 AM I'd post a review on my blog ASAP, but I'll wait until morning. I can't wait for Logan's story!

And that picture is amazeballs.


message 12: by Jay (new)

Jay McLean Lol. Thanks Chrissy! I'm glad you enjoyed it. Make sure you message me the link to your blog so I can check it out.


message 13: by [deleted user] (new)

Loved the book. And I can totally picture Jake looking like that. He is HOT!!!!


message 14: by Polly (new)

Polly umm if that dude is a real life baseball player I need to become a fan!!


message 15: by Jay (new)

Jay McLean Polly wrote: "umm if that dude is a real life baseball player I need to become a fan!!"
Right? who is he? google images does not help!


message 16: by Polly (new)

Polly I'm fixin to go detective on his ass as soon as my kids are asleep! Lol


message 17: by Jay (new)

Jay McLean Polly wrote: "I'm fixin to go detective on his ass as soon as my kids are asleep! Lol"

haha! make sure you share with everyone your findings :)


message 18: by Polly (new)

Polly so after much looking (drooling) I've decided he's prob a college player who just likes Boston. He's a bit young for the majors.
But damn he needs to be drafted ASAP.


message 19: by Jay (new)

Jay McLean Lol. Well either way he's very stalk worthy.


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