Added a new short story
I just added an impromptu original fic to my writing and it's here:
Invocation: The First Offense
This is a weird little story that popped into my head and ended differently than I'd planned. It's not a romance, it's not exactly our world, and it's less about getting what you want and need as it is about being true to yourself.
Basically, a cop pulls a woman over for speeding and she decides not to pay the fine but take another option. Bow-chicka-bow time? Not exactly.
It's around 4,000 words, there's discipline in here, and it's more head games than sex games.
Invocation: The First Offense
This is a weird little story that popped into my head and ended differently than I'd planned. It's not a romance, it's not exactly our world, and it's less about getting what you want and need as it is about being true to yourself.
Basically, a cop pulls a woman over for speeding and she decides not to pay the fine but take another option. Bow-chicka-bow time? Not exactly.
It's around 4,000 words, there's discipline in here, and it's more head games than sex games.
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Oct 12, 2013 10:03AM
Very interesting take on crime and punishment.
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Vivian wrote: "Very interesting take on crime and punishment."
Thank you, Vivian! It was one of those ideas that came to me and took over until I'd written it down.
Thank you, Vivian! It was one of those ideas that came to me and took over until I'd written it down.
Vivian wrote: "The ring was pretty creepy actually."
That bit came to me as I was writing and thought I had it all figured out.
That bit came to me as I was writing and thought I had it all figured out.
Jane wrote: "Vivian wrote: "The ring was pretty creepy actually."
That bit came to me as I was writing and thought I had it all figured out."
What seemed creepy to you out of interest? It's an ID badge of sorts telling the world that he's one of the cops who can offer you an alternative.
That bit came to me as I was writing and thought I had it all figured out."
What seemed creepy to you out of interest? It's an ID badge of sorts telling the world that he's one of the cops who can offer you an alternative.
Yeah, but it seemed like a wedding band.
Well, he had one of those too, but it's more like a Super Bowl ring, showing he's in a club of sorts.
Jane wrote: "Well, he had one of those too, but it's more like a Super Bowl ring, showing he's in a club of sorts."Well, that's psychologically telling on my part, isn't it?
Vivian wrote: "Jane wrote: "Well, he had one of those too, but it's more like a Super Bowl ring, showing he's in a club of sorts."
Well, that's psychologically telling on my part, isn't it?"
I don't know about that but thank you for explaining!
Well, that's psychologically telling on my part, isn't it?"
I don't know about that but thank you for explaining!
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