Help! And poetry!
Happy holidays! Happy New Year! Next post in 2016!
First off, this is an appeal: I need title help again. I wanted to call the Two Princesses prequel just plain Bamarre. But my editor nixed that, alas, so I’m back in title misery.
This no more than what is revealed in the first chapter, but I think you need to know something to get in title mode: The story starts off Rapunzel’ish. Peregrine, nicknamed Perry, is born into an underclass Bamarre family. Impoverished, the father steals from the l...
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Dec 23, 2015 08:17PM
well since it starts with Rapunzel you could involve hair in the title like "a braid of Bamarre" or " a tale of a Bamarrian princess"?
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Tsneem wrote: "well since it starts with Rapunzel you could involve hair in the title like "a braid of Bamarre" or " a tale of a Bamarrian princess"?"Thank you!
I like the idea of a simple title too, which would stay pretty consistent with what you've had in the past. What about Stolen or possibly The Stolen Lady (operating under the assumption that Lady Klausine raises Perry as a lady) or The Stolen Princess ?You can tell I'm stuck on the stolen thing :)
Brenda wrote: "I like the idea of a simple title too, which would stay pretty consistent with what you've had in the past. What about Stolen or possibly The Stolen Lady (operating under the assumption that Lady K..."Thanks! I'm growing a list for my editor.
best of luck! I'm excited to see it either way
Outlandish. Based on the archaic adjective peregrine.
Peregrine's Twist? The Changeling's Tale? Or just The Changeling?
Thank you! I'm adding them to the growing list for my editor.
Before Bamarre? or Unknown Origins? As you can tell I am not good at this.
Gail wrote: "Thank you! I'm adding them to the growing list for my editor."Thank you!
