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David
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May 04, 2013 03:03PM

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It was a "show" versus "tell" method of establishing one of my main protagonists' character as a morally rich atheist.
I believe that flashbacks, in general, are valuable in maintaining a show don't tell experience for the reader.

I used my first flashback about 4 or 5 paragraphs down. I started with my mothers funeral and then flashed back to age 3. Are you talking about the first line first chapter? etc.

For its follow up I've included a flashback to the past of some of the main characters that are introduced in book one. This time it's more to give an impression as to how formidable they were in the past (plus it has a tank, which is always cool, right?)

That'd be great, I hope you enjoy but welcome criticism of any flavour! I don't have any links of Goodreads, but I can link them to you.
Flashforward (Amazon look inside): http://amzn.com/B00CB1OPI4
Flashback (chapter preview): http://adelliott.wordpress.com/2013/0...