Sequel Addicted discussion

I am shivering without knowing why
We became one but it was just a lie
You held my hand and warmed it up
I thougt it would last but later left it cold and all just ended up.

Tears forming in teh sadness of my eyes
Rolling down remembering the pain of every lie
Piercing up still my broken heart
Falling deeply fainted as we're apart.

(still have the next stanza's 1st line but wasn't continued)

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I want to have my heart be asleep
Tell it to be aware of the wounds,now too much too deep
It's too much od how it has no sight yet it can believe
How it bleeds with pain yet still continues to hope and live.

My eyes ran out of water to roll a tear
I already suffered too much, but still nothing from it is clear
All is vague yet my heart still hopes far too much
It doesn't fail to hurt yet it still loves.




Want to continue these poems?

"I am shivering without knowing why"

suggest instead:

I shiver yet know not why.