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message 1: by P.D.R. (new)

P.D.R. Lindsay (pdrlindsay) | 1760 comments I need three (or more) Beta readers - Lesley? Kathleen? Anyone with an analytical mind and a broad range of reading to read my newest novel which is more a novella, 45,000 words.

I just need a good reader's view of the story overall and to answer a couple of simple questions.
Does my MC appeal and solve his problem?
and
Does the ending work?

The story is set in 1872, mainly in India, and it is a tough story involving off the scene rape (i.e no descriptions) and kidnapping.


message 2: by Lesley (new)

Lesley | 1594 comments Yes, you can send another one my p.d.r. :)


message 3: by P.D.R. (new)

P.D.R. Lindsay (pdrlindsay) | 1760 comments Wonderful! I am so grateful. Would you like a .doc file or a paper copy?


message 4: by Lesley (new)

Lesley | 1594 comments .doc for me thanks. You still got my email address?


message 5: by P.D.R. (new)

P.D.R. Lindsay (pdrlindsay) | 1760 comments If you could please message me with your emails as I can't get my email address system working in this stupid Outlook and if I hsven't emailed a person for a while their address slips off.

And thank you. Will find a way to pay back later.


message 6: by Kirsten (new)

Kirsten McKenzie (kirstenmckenzieauthor) | 278 comments I'd be happy to read it to PDR? Let me know. Kirsten


message 7: by P.D.R. (new)

P.D.R. Lindsay (pdrlindsay) | 1760 comments Great! The more the merrier as I am very worried about this novel.
How would you like it? Hard copy or doc file?


message 8: by Kirsten (new)

Kirsten McKenzie (kirstenmckenzieauthor) | 278 comments A .doc file is good. [email protected]


message 9: by P.D.R. (new)

P.D.R. Lindsay (pdrlindsay) | 1760 comments Lovely, thank you. This is a tidied up first draft


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