Blazing Readers & Wordy Writers discussion

  

Please note: my writing for poetry honestly stinks so bear with me.

It's obvious you hate me
though I've done nothing wrong
I've never even met you so what could I have done?

You and I should get along so awfully
So what happened to the fondness we shared
Did someone take it away from you
Did they strip it away from your very being

But I'm relying on your common decency
it just takes a while to reach from your head to your fist
I just don't understand what makes this ugly feeling grow bolder

My soul is as black as a pirate's
nothing can save me from this gloom I constantly live through
nothing but Him

He will save me
He will save me
He will save me

I am the servant and He is the master of all
I obey and He remains perfect
forever

It's been a year
one full year since I've seen you
you hardly speak, you hardly talk
when you see me, your eyes turn the other way

You follow your leaders and do what you're told
you follow them no matter what

I thought you were my friend
but like the others, you ignored me
you called my family evil but we were revealing truth

You said that what we were saying was all lies
you never asked us the full story
you never asked

So what does that make us
you assume everything you're being told is true
but you're only fed the lies

Nothing you believe in is true
nothing you can say will change my mind

I try reaching out but you pull away
you hate what we've done and find yourself falling into despair

Make a fast melodic then while reading

You say you want to control the world
gotta gotta gotta go!

You say you have a desire to live
gotta gotta gotta go!

You have no idea what you're asking for
But you keep repeating these words: gotta gotta gotta go!

You. Told. Me. You. Were. Busy.
gotta gotta gotta go!

Your eyes are far away
The map represents you and the tape is your voice
Followed it all along
you had the choice

And I'm looking to the day I memorize your voice (doesn't count as a para)

Lorien Rhys wrote: "

It's been a year
one full year since I've seen you
you hardly speak, you hardly talk
when you see me, your eyes turn the other way

You follow your leaders and do what you're told
you follow th..."

I really like the beginning of this one. It's almost haunting. Do you have titles for your pieces? It seems like you write more freestyle than anything else. I prefer freestyle, too. Thanks for sharing!

Hehe. Sometimes yes and sometimes no. I honestly don't know what to title most of them. XD
Thanks Coralie!

WIP

I try to discover
A little something to make me sweeter
Oh buddy refrain
From wrecking my life

WIP

All these people, and all these voices

Lorien Rhys wrote: "Make a fast melodic then while reading




You say you want to control the world
gotta gotta gotta go!

You say you have a desire to live
gotta gotta gotta go!

You have no idea what you're askin..."



I enjoyed this very much! The shortness and repetition marry quite well together. :)

  

We elect different magicians to say the right words
Everyone urges us to vote for the right magician
If only we had magician X
Then things would be better
If only we had magician Y
She would be better

In return,
We elect the same magicians
Who all have the same agenda
At the end of the day