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If you are really looking for a detailed review, please email a copy to [email protected]
Your story really started off well but there are minor mistakes that can distract the reader.
eg: ‘Yeah, exactly.’ replied Sahil as a broad smile evaded his face.
The full stop in the dialogue tag needs to be a comma.
I'd be happy to review one chapter for you!