Goodreads Authors/Readers discussion

Hello,
I am new to Goodreads and I need people to read, and then give a review of my story. I am reaching out to readers on this site, as I value an honest opinion from a diverse group of readers.
My story is The Cave On Lake Loon – The Battle Within. This is my first novel so I am new to all of this.
Here is a link to my book and more information about me.
https://www.smashwords.com/profile/vi...

Thank you so much for investing your time and imagination into my adventure.
Sincerely
Cynthia Keirstead -De La Rosa

Hey, new one here, I'm a writer, screenwriter (ha, poor), reader, lover of books and creating. I made 2 picture books a while ago for my friends and family that had new kids during Christmas time cuz I couldn't figure out what to buy them. Ha!

They're fun rhyming books with facts about 1: Animals and 2: Vroom (this one about cars, trucks, motorcycles, etc)

Would love comments and critiques, don't worry have thick skin, and better from strangers then family and friends that just placate.

https://www.amazon.com/Fletch-Friday-...

And you don't have to buy them, can just read the look inside amazon does if need be.

Appreciate the time and help,

J.S. Jones aka Fletch Friday Dog