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Hey Everyone i just need a favor from you all i have started writing poems and different stories so here is a poem written by me do tell me your suggestions regarding it either you like it or not.
Thank you!

Poem Name: "I find crises as an opportunity"

The whole life seems to be faded
When I wasn't able it to manipulated

Life was accustomed to be deteriorated
Until I haven’t choose it to be shaded

By bringing my life from negative to positive
I have become motivated

That with sound self confidence
I can succeeded

I started to at look every obstacle I ever hurdled
So I can work hard to accomplish what I ever wanted

I never gave up and believed in being one step closer to
“yes”
Because I knew that reality born in imagination
and now
I am fortunate to provide my life a feeling of purpose and gratification.

I transferred this to the Author Spotlight section Sammy..

Okay Thank you so much :)