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message 51: by [deleted user] (new)

((Spelled it perfectly))
"An elf? Are you on drugs or something? Elves don't exist." Corpes says, finishing his donut.


message 52: by Book - Dragon, Queen of the Night Owls (new)

Book -  Dragon | 41 comments Kiara put her knife in its sheath.


message 53: by Avery (new)

Avery Judd (averyisabelle) Biana tucks back her hair to show her pointy ears, “Are you sure?” She also takes out her gloves and throws some fire from her hands into and empty fireplace.


message 54: by Book - Dragon, Queen of the Night Owls (new)

Book -  Dragon | 41 comments "After the insanity virus, I'll believe anything." Kiara mumbled. She stepped into the shadows and sat down.


message 55: by [deleted user] (new)

Corpes' left eye blinked. The right eye was covered by his grey hair. "Weirdo." was all he said.


message 56: by EllieJellyBean :D, Elliphant Flavored Elliebean (new)

EllieJellyBean :D | 59 comments “Elf’s are real.”
*He then turns to the girl that had the fire power*
“You’re an Elf too! That’s really cool! Are you from this world?”


message 57: by Avery (new)

Avery Judd (averyisabelle) “I am. I knew you were because…well…you know.” She motions to him, assuming he understands she meant his looks. “I…I…live in London right now. There was an accident I caused, and I was forced to leave my city.” She looked into the fire to hide the hurt in her face.


message 58: by [deleted user] (new)

Corpes stared silently at Biana, and then joined Kiara in the shadows. "Got any room?"


message 59: by Book - Dragon, Queen of the Night Owls (new)

Book -  Dragon | 41 comments Kiara sighed. "Have a seat I guess." She started polishing her knife and checking her supplies.


message 60: by Denali (new)

Denali Christianson ~Semi-active~ (denalichristianson) Before Kathreya or Vultan could do anything, two people had landed hard on their backs. Then they started fighting.
The boy seemed to think elves weren't real, and Kathreya didn't blame him. Many humans thought the same.
But that made Alvay and Biana kind of mad. They both started fighting, and pretty soon the new girl had joined in.
Kathreya sighed, letting it resolve itself.
Biana had apparently had an accident with her powers that had gotten her banished. Kathreya ached for her, felt the empathy stirring in her chest.
It had happened to her too, at one time.
Vultan was glancing at each face in turn, like he was trying to read their past in each of their eyes.
Kathreya raised an eyebrow. She'd seen that behavior before. Kaleka.
So Vultan was a prophet.
She smiled, respect for the young man growing.


message 61: by [deleted user] (new)

Corpes sits down and pulls up his skeleton mask to his mouth. "You're quieter than the rest. I like that."


message 62: by Book - Dragon, Queen of the Night Owls (new)

Book -  Dragon | 41 comments Kiara shrugged. "You have to be quiet where I'm from, or they find you."


message 63: by Avery (new)

Avery Judd (averyisabelle) “Ok, back to our ‘get to know everyone better’. I’m Biana. I’m 17. I was banished because I killed 12 people with my powers. Including my twin brother.” She looked down and tears dropped to the floor, “I’m sorry.”


message 64: by Denali (new)

Denali Christianson ~Semi-active~ (denalichristianson) Biana sat down, all business.
“Ok, back to our ‘get to know everyone better’. I’m Biana. I’m 17. I was banished because I killed 12 people with my powers. Including my twin brother.” A tear dropped from her eye as she looked down. “I’m sorry."
Kathreya's heart broke for her.
"Don't apologize. That's not easy," she said quietly, scooting closer to the girl.


message 65: by [deleted user] (new)

"They? And what do you mean "from" because I know you ain't from here. I know IM not. Where the heck are we?"


message 66: by Denali (new)

Denali Christianson ~Semi-active~ (denalichristianson) Vultan glanced at Biana.
She'd done something terrible, but it didn't change his opinion of her. No one should have to live with that kind of guilt.
He remembered the fateful day that had taken his mother.
Everyone had called him brave, but he'd just been working out of terrified necessity.
It hadn't done any good.


message 67: by Book - Dragon, Queen of the Night Owls (new)

Book -  Dragon | 41 comments "I don't know where we are, I'm from Virginia. And by they I mean the insane." She stared st the ceiling in thought. Then she shook her head and started to fiddle with her stuff.


message 68: by Book - Dragon, Queen of the Night Owls (new)

Book -  Dragon | 41 comments *at


message 69: by Denali (new)

Denali Christianson ~Semi-active~ (denalichristianson) ((OOps, sorry, I didn't know who was talking to who. XD))


message 70: by Denali (new)

Denali Christianson ~Semi-active~ (denalichristianson) ((I'm just deleting my second comment))


message 71: by Avery (new)

Avery Judd (averyisabelle) Biana smiled at Kathreya. She appreciated someone actually understanding. Usually people ran away or screamed. “Thank you.”


message 72: by [deleted user] (new)

"Well, THIS is getting insane. Nice seeing you, girl." Corpes and push past everyone to the exit."


message 73: by Denali (new)

Denali Christianson ~Semi-active~ (denalichristianson) "Thank you," Biana said with a smile.
"You're welcome. I... I know how it feels to do something terrible and feel hopeless about it. I've done it before. Is there anything I can do to help?"


message 74: by Denali (new)

Denali Christianson ~Semi-active~ (denalichristianson) The guy with the skeleton mask stood up and pushed past everyone, trying to get out.
Vultan stood and followed him at a safe distance. He wanted to know who he was.


message 75: by [deleted user] (new)

(( Are you the narrator or?))


message 76: by Book - Dragon, Queen of the Night Owls (new)

Book -  Dragon | 41 comments ((btw there is no exit, so yeah))


message 77: by Book - Dragon, Queen of the Night Owls (new)

Book -  Dragon | 41 comments Kiara watched the boy run away. He seemed tough, like her, and she respected that.


message 78: by [deleted user] (new)

"Alright...wait, where am I going...?" Corpes looked this way and that.


message 79: by Avery (new)

Avery Judd (averyisabelle) “I just want my brother back,” a few tears decided to escape and Biana flicked them away as quick as possible. “You couldn’t have done something word than me.”


message 80: by Avery (new)

Avery Judd (averyisabelle) *worse


message 81: by Denali (new)

Denali Christianson ~Semi-active~ (denalichristianson) ((Lol no but I have two characters in here so I keep jumping between them. Fyi, there's tons of hallways he can run down and disappear through but no way to get out of the castle itself.))


message 82: by [deleted user] (new)

Book wrote: "Kiara watched the boy run away. He seemed tough, like her, and she respected that."

((Run away? I beg to differ! XD))


message 83: by Denali (new)

Denali Christianson ~Semi-active~ (denalichristianson) “I just want my brother back,” Biana whispered. Tears leaked from her eyes and she flicked them away quickly. “You couldn’t have done something worse than me.”
Kathreya winced. "Um... yeah, I could. I did," she added with a whisper. "Perhaps not by much, but it was pretty bad."


message 84: by Denali (new)

Denali Christianson ~Semi-active~ (denalichristianson) Vultan followed the boy. He reached a fork in the hallway and muttered something.
Vultan raised an eyebrow.
He was curious to know more about this boy.


message 85: by [deleted user] (last edited Dec 26, 2021 07:18PM) (new)

((Ah I see))
Corpes walked along the halls silently without worrying...until he found himself in the same room with the rest again.
"What the...oh, this is stupid. It looped me back around with these idiots." He turns away.


message 86: by Book - Dragon, Queen of the Night Owls (new)

Book -  Dragon | 41 comments Kiara continued to ignore everyone. She wasn't ready to trust yet.


message 87: by Avery (new)

Avery Judd (averyisabelle) Biana frowned, “I’m so sorry.”


message 88: by Denali (new)

Denali Christianson ~Semi-active~ (denalichristianson) As Vultan followed, the boy ended up back in the large room. Vultan ducked into an alcove where he wouldn't see him once he turned around.
"What the... oh, this is stupid. It looped me back around with these idiots."
Vultan had to cover a chuckle. Some nerve he had.


message 89: by Denali (new)

Denali Christianson ~Semi-active~ (denalichristianson) "I'm so sorry," Biana said with a frown.
Kathreya shook her head. "Don't be. It was bad, but its in the past. I couldn't live with the pain for a hundred years, so I finally had to let it go."


message 90: by Avery (new)

Avery Judd (averyisabelle) Biana nodded. She remembered the night. She remembered her brother’s eyes streaming with tears. 𝐷𝑜𝑛’𝑡 𝑑𝑜 𝑡ℎ𝑖𝑠, 𝐵𝑖𝑎𝑛𝑎, 𝑑𝑜𝑛’𝑡 𝑑𝑜 𝑡ℎ𝑖𝑠. But she couldn’t help it. Someone had taken over her and was somehow controlling her. She had killed 11 people and then, she shot fire at her brother and he was dead. She remembered waking up in jail. It was the worst place she had ever been. It felt like all the happiness had vanished from her life. And indeed it had. It was her fault. Why had she done it. “My grandfather was Aandolf Lankester, I don’t know if you’ve heard of him.”


message 91: by [deleted user] (new)

Corpes takes off his backpack and digs into it, picking up small cameras and a tablet he has stolen. He goes and sits down by Kiara again without saying anything at all and starts to power on all the electronics.


message 92: by Book - Dragon, Queen of the Night Owls (new)

Book -  Dragon | 41 comments Kiara was half listening to what was going on. She didn't really care. All she cared about was surviving in this broken world.


message 93: by EllieJellyBean :D, Elliphant Flavored Elliebean (new)

EllieJellyBean :D | 59 comments “So, what’s happening?”


message 94: by Book - Dragon, Queen of the Night Owls (new)

Book -  Dragon | 41 comments The boy was sitting next to her again with some electronic devices. She was curious but not really. After society had collapsed the WiFi and cell towers had been destroyed. There was no use for phones or tablets now.


message 95: by EllieJellyBean :D, Elliphant Flavored Elliebean (new)

EllieJellyBean :D | 59 comments “I need to find Inara!!”


message 96: by Avery (new)

Avery Judd (averyisabelle) Biana looked at the boy again, “Remind me of your name again? And there’s no way out, unfortunately.”


message 97: by Avery (new)

Avery Judd (averyisabelle) ((also what’s happening is Corpes is trying to find a way out and Denali’s character is following him. And then Biana just explained she had accidentally killed 12 people and was banished from her city. i think that’s all))


message 98: by [deleted user] (new)

"Name's Deadeye." Corpes said. "And leave me alone." Corpes set down the cameras on the floor.


message 99: by Avery (new)

Avery Judd (averyisabelle) Biana shoots the boy a glare, “I’m not talking to you.”


message 100: by EllieJellyBean :D, Elliphant Flavored Elliebean (new)

EllieJellyBean :D | 59 comments “My names Alvay! What’s yours?”


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