WARRIORS: Shifting Shores discussion

Name: Unless you’re making a loner or rogue, it must be a proper Clan name with a prefix and suffix.
Age: In moons, which translate to months.
Gender:
Sexuality: Optional.

Clan:
Role:

Appearance: Two sentences of appearance even if you have an image. Special markings, eye color, all of that.
Personality: Four sentences of personality.
History: Five sentences of history unless you have a kit or apprentice, but we still require a solid paragraph if not two.

Other:

Name: Summerpaw
Age: 9 moons
Gender: She-cat
Sexuality: Straight

Clan: VineClan
Role: Apprentice

Appearance: Golden she-cat with light ginger tabby stripes, white paws. She has green eyes and is very fluffy.
Personality: Summerpaw is very outgoing and brave, and she isn't afraid to stand up for what she thinks is right. Sometimes that can be a problem though, especially when she disagrees with her mentor (idk who that is yet, we'll see when there are more warriors in this clan 🤷).
History: When Summerpaw was a kit, sickness struck the Clan and many of her littermates went on to StarClan. Now, Summerpaw tries to be the best apprentice she can be while her littermates watch from Silverpelt. So far, she is well on her way to becoming an amazing warrior for her Clan.

Please let me know if I need to correct anything :)

Okay I edited it we're good unless something else needs changed

((Ok I’m not a mod or anything so anyone lemme know if I’m overstepping, but Rhyleigh I think in the history part of your cat, saying that “all of her littermates went on to Starclan” is probably not a good idea? Maybe most or, even better, many went on would be more ideal? Bcs there’s a chance in the future there might be cats made in the same age range so that history might not hold up?))

That makes sense, thanks for the feedback!

Anything else that y'all think could be better?

That was one of my first few OCs so I know it needs some work

Type this: <blockquote><p> in front of your text, no space after. Just that right in front of where name starts. That makes posts look neater! As for the character itself—sorry for the wait, life got hectic—that's a great start! Approved for now and I'll get a character up and going soon as an example!!

Okay thank you!