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THE FIRST WORLD WAR
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4. HF - ALL QUIET ON THE WESTERN FRONT - CHAPTER FOUR (51 - 74) (05/23/11 - 05/29/11) ~ No spoilers, please
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My fourth-grade son has been studying for a test in school about poetry devices, so I'm really noticing those in this chapter. Baumer isn't just a writer, he is a poet. We see metaphor, "The front is a mysterious whirlpool" (page 55). We see repetition, "Earth! Earth! Earth!" (page 55) and the use of rain on page 74. We see personification, as the earth "shelters [the soldier] and releases him for ten seconds to live" (page 55). And simile, "The searchlights begin to sweep the dark sky... like giant tapering rulers" (page 59).
Anyone else noticing examples of poetic devices? I'd be interested how many are lost or changed in the translation. Alliteration, for example, isn't likely to stay consistent.
Here is a good list of poetic devices with their definitions: http://projects.uwc.utexas.edu/handou...

Finally our boys are off to some action. Their action however is to string barbed wire and be the targets for artillery and gas attacks.
The hardening of our 19 year olds shows by Breamers sheltering of the younger, or anyway newer, man during the barrage.
The need to tell others about gas masks while/before putting them on is illustrating these fellows being in this together.
The fact that the horses suffering and dying seems less acceptable to endure than the men is telling too. The need for decency – the horses didn’t enlist or even support the government or feel patriotism.
There is continued loss of men but, so far, none of ours has suffered injury during our reading – Kemmerich was down already when we arrived.
So we havn't seen the enemy, in person, yet

You make a lot of good points, any of which can start an interesting discussion. I'll start with the last, "So we haven't seen the enemy, in person, yet." So far, the enemy is just something out there sending shells at our boys. There hasn't been much discussion about who the enemy is, or why they are the enemy. We hear about the youth being encouraged to join up, and Baumer talks about how they love their country. But not much more politics than that.


You make a lot of good points, any of which can start an interesting discussion. I'l..."
I seem to have some memory from somewhere that this war was promtoed over sometime in the press - creating in several countries, Germany & England at least & I think France too, a ground swell of support for the war. I thinnk I remember that literacy was at new highs in western Europe and newspapers were everywhere (no TV after all)

Elizabeth, I had no idea that poetry was taught in any capacity in the fourth grade but I'm glad it is:) I too feel that the writing is very poetic and wonder what is lost in translation. However, I have read bad translations of books in the past and although I have no way of knowing, this seems like a good one.
What did everyone think about when Kat and Baumer consider killing the young recruit at the end of the chapter. They are about to do so, when others arrive. As soon as there are witnesses, they decide to get him the stretcher although they know he will suffer horribly for hours until he dies. Did anyone else consider the contrast regarding how the horses are treated compared to the recruit? No one ever questions that killing the horses was the right thing to do. Yet, in the case of a man, it is the opposite. What is the "right" choice here?

It is weird, because it seems like depersonalizing war should make it less scary. But it is the opposite. Never knowing when a shell might fall and kill you in seconds. Or (maybe) worse, maim you and shred those around you.

Sarah, I found that section striking; these vets know what is coming next for the new recruit: horses and people become the same in the eyes of mercy. However, I think they made the right choice of getting a stretcher: he might not walk but he has pretty good odds he will live. I can't help but think this recruit is going to have a rough time adjusting to his wounds, though. Not easy.

I keep thinking of WWI as a transition war-- new technology was emerging but wasn't as widespread or as effectively used as WWII. Propaganda was not a new thing, but being able to mass-produce it and get it out quickly was new. To some extent, that balanced with the reporting from the front. I think this was the first war where people could follow along daily with the battles. The first chance for the people at home to read concurrent and first-hand accounts of the fighting. As people knew more about war and the enemy, propaganda was "needed" to motivate people enough to keep fighting.

You make very good points, Sarah, and ask some nicely thought-provoking questions. On one level, this book is just a joe-blow soldier writing about what happened to him. On another level, Remarque has carefully crafted this story to get his message across that war is horrible. I think it is no accident that the wounded horses and the wounded recruit are in the same chapter. I think we are meant to compare them, and ask ourselves what is, or should be, different. It is a mercy to kill an injured horse. Is it a mercy to kill an injured man? It is mentioned that the horses are innocent. But aren't the privates, the young men fresh from home, also somewhat innocent? Did they start the war? What are they getting from it? The answers are difficult.

And I think this was the first big war that had war reporters, newspaper men (now we would add women) who spent some time with the troops and then wrote about it.

This is such a big question I separated it out.
Firstly, I've been wondering to myself if they were really going to do it. In my memory of past times reading the book, they just talked about it and seriously considered it. This time through, it struck me that they had actually decided to go through with it, and then other people arrived.
But there are lots of examples in life where people decide to do something, and then hesitate and/or change their minds when it comes to actually doing it. Would Baumer and Kat actually have done it? Since they are soldiers and have become used to killing, I think they were probably numbed enough to follow through. But maybe one of them would have said, "Naw, let's just wait."
Personally, I think the "right" thing to do is what ended up happening, i.e. getting the stretcher and at least trying to save the recruit. (Interesting, isn't it, that the recruit doesn't have a name. More of that depersonalization.) Yes, there is a strong argument that it would be a mercy to kill someone who will die anyway and who is in great pain. But how can you judge the "will die anyway" part? And how much pain is enough? Yes, I think there are some situations where it seems blazingly obvious. And I think Remarque is trying to give us one of those situations to make us think. But once you start down that mercy killing path, it becomes easier and easier to do it again and harder and harder to accurately judge.

As their transport carries them to the front, Baumer describes, "The roar of the guns makes our lorry stagger, the reverberation rolls raging away to the rear, everything quakes. Our faces change imperceptibly. We are not, indeed, in the front line, but only in the reserves, yet in every face can be read: This is the front, now we are within its embrace" (page 53).
On page 54 Baumer writes, "Every time it is the same. We start out for the front plain soldiers, either cheerful or gloomy: then come the first gun-emplacements and every word of our speech has a new ring."
Baumer says, "It is not fear" (page 53). At least he says it isn't fear for those who have been at the front repeatedly since they have grown thick skins. Do you think that is true? How long do you think it takes to become so numb to fear?

Mentioning propaganda and WWII it should be noted that Goebbles was a first thinker in propaganda for the Nazis. He actually arranged to have separate campaigns for farmers, for factory workers etc. He sent people to bars in neighborhoods to determine the feelings in that area and what concerned those people.
He led campaign mailing with different messages for different interest groups and different areas.
Just a passing comment.


Yes, it's really interesting. For me it's obvious that the French, British, Americans and Russians were the enemy. In WWI, the Japanese were even enemies of Germany. Italy plays an ambivalent role. Actually, they were allies of Germany and Austria. Italy joined the side to get to South Tyrol. The Allies had promised this.
The opponents, however, are an anonymous mass. There is no personalized enemies. My grandfather was a railroad soldier, i.e. he belonged to the military field of railways, and was stationed in Romania. He needed not to fight. He therefore told by the beauty of the country and the friendliness of the people. So something very different than the story of the soldier baumer.

Elizabeth S (who is a great moderator) is continuing this book discussion this week.
This is a May/June/July discussion so everybody has plenty of time to read this selection.
This week's assigned reading is as follows for Week Four:
Week 4, May 23-29: Chapter Four (pages 51-74)
I know that everyone can muster the 23 pages this week. This, I know, will prove to be a great discussion of World War I, different perspectives on a soldier who is portrayed to actually have served in the German army as well as the effects of war and suffering and despair on all sides.
This is the eighth historical fiction group selected book.
We will open up a thread for each week's reading. Please make sure to post in the particular thread dedicated to those specific chapters and page numbers to avoid spoilers if you are catching up.
This book was kicked off on May 2nd.
We always enjoy the participation of all group members. Amazon, Barnes and Noble and other noted on line booksellers do have copies of the book and shipment can be expedited. The book can also be obtained easily at your local library, or on your Kindle or even Audible.
This is a non spoiler thread.
Welcome,
~Bentley
Here is a link to the introductory thread:
http://www.goodreads.com/topic/show/5...
Here is a link to the Table of Contents and Syllabus:
http://www.goodreads.com/topic/show/5...
Here is the link to the glossary which is a spoiler thread so beware if you do not like spoilers of any kind - but the links added here will be very useful in understanding the personages discussed, their background, the events and the battles, or the environment itself, etc.
http://www.goodreads.com/topic/show/5...
Here is a link to the Military History folder which deals with World War I: (there is a lot here)
http://www.goodreads.com/topic/group_...
Thank you for joining Elizabeth and the History Book Club on this journey.