Writing Passionates discussion

Of this poem I wrote in 5 minutes

The misty morning air covers with dew
The flowers laid bare, natures fair cue

The hands of a bride
The sides of a grave
The windows of a house
The entrance of a cave

These are the places a rose will be found
The colors are plenty
The petals are sound

The beauty of a girl pretty as can be
The beauty of a child free as can be
The beauty of a star bright as can be
These are the things a petal is to me

The coldness of a life locked with apathy
The coldness of a heart locked with love
The coldness of a casket locked with key
These are the things a thorn is to me

A rose has them both, as you plainly can see
A rose represents what has been and what will be
History’s sad story repeated time and again
A bittersweet story repeated to no end

As time soon will pass, as it always does
Many things will be forgotten, as will this poem
But the rose will be here to remind us all
Of the beauty and death in life that all recall

I like it! A couple lines may have had too many sylables, but nothing horrible. Overall, a good poem. :D