My "shorts" are going to be free today for the next 24 hours. I'd appreciate any beta you guys and ladies have for me.
One thing. Does it look too sloppy on the Kindle device? I want indented paragraphs & the format is better on my word doc. I have to figure out and fool with that somemore especially before I get done with my next set of stories! I'll give you a little run down on what some of the tales are about.
The Jerk and the Clerk is about exact justice. A man shoots another in the neck during a robbery. The victim losses all control of his limbs from the neck down. His assailant is caught, put on trial and sentenced to have the exact injurys surgically inflicted upon him with no jail time involved.
Mandate 325: The American population has become too lazy and fat. They do not produce anything anymore. The slaves of rest of the world struggle to hold up and support the "nation of the free". The the good ol' folks of the "Red, White, and Blue" are forced to give something back. That product is human fat, flash frozen and air dropped to starving children all over the world.
Lotto: A homeless man wins the worlds largest lottery. What does he do with the money? Same thing we all would do...he spends every penny of it on an atomic bomb!
Really, I want some of your opinions on the writing, the story ideas and so on. Either here or on Amazon. Thanks! ~Bob Page~
One thing. Does it look too sloppy on the Kindle device? I want indented paragraphs & the format is better on my word doc. I have to figure out and fool with that somemore especially before I get done with my next set of stories! I'll give you a little run down on what some of the tales are about.
The Jerk and the Clerk is about exact justice. A man shoots another in the neck during a robbery. The victim losses all control of his limbs from the neck down. His assailant is caught, put on trial and sentenced to
have the exact injurys surgically inflicted upon him with no jail time involved.
Mandate 325: The American population has become too lazy and fat. They do not produce anything anymore. The slaves of rest of the world struggle to hold up and support the "nation of the free". The the good ol' folks of the "Red, White, and Blue" are forced to give something back. That product is human fat, flash frozen and air dropped to starving children all over the world.
Lotto: A homeless man wins the worlds largest lottery. What does he do with the money? Same thing we all would do...he spends every penny of it on an atomic bomb!
Really, I want some of your opinions on the writing, the story ideas and so on. Either here or on Amazon. Thanks! ~Bob Page~
http://www.amazon.com/Clerk-Other-Dir...
P.S I'll probably bump this during the duration of this promo.