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message 51: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments He was trying to come up woth a plan to being her back to safty. He piller away his head and stood up. He hope she would do the same


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments "You want me to stand up?" She said. "sorry no can do."


message 53: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments He put hos head between he arm and body. Then he pulled and tried to get her up


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments "I can't walk." She whispered. "It's alright." She said. She stood up. "I can't walk."


message 55: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments He wouldn't give up that easy. He was going to get her home safe and sound. He took one step.


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments "What do you want me to do? I can't step because my leg hurts really bad." She said


message 57: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments He looked up at her. He tried to let his eyes speak with her even if he wasn't sure if it would work


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She looked in his eyes. she felt something weird coming from him. "I can't walk .Unless if you know something."


message 59: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments He liters his head a little. He know how unsafe the forest could at night. He wanted her out of there before it was completly dark


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments "You want me out of the forest before dark?" She asked. She winced at the pain. She smiled some. "Do you know how I can walk?"


message 61: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments Seriously... Why do you think I'm here?" He though. He looked forward and took another step


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She didn't hear him but could tell he was getting mad. She frowned some. "Never mind." She took one step and fell.


message 63: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments He fell aswell. He moved a bit from her. "Time for plan B." He thought. He he grabed her shirt with his mouth and drages her out from the forest


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments "This doesn't help it hurts worse as you do this." She said.


message 65: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments He didn't care. It was an easy way out


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She winced in pain. "Stop your hurting me." She said.


message 67: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments It wasn't far untill they where out. He wouldn't stop untill she was out


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments "Stop." She said. Her leg was in so much pain. "Your hurting it."


message 69: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments When it was only a step out from the forest he let go of her.


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She blinked with tears coming down her eyes. "It hurts." She whispered.


message 71: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments He walked to face her. His ears were hanging to tell her he was sorry


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments "It's ok." She said and pet him on the head.


message 73: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments He laied down again


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments "Your a prety wolf." She paused for a moment."I like you. You saved me."


message 75: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments He she could easily get help now. He closed his eyes and fall asleep


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She smiled some and got up slowly. She saw her parents and explained what happened leaving out the part of the wolf. They took her in the hosptial and she had a sprained ankle and dislocated knee. She came home a few hours later.


message 77: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments When he woke up he notice she was gone. "someone must have take care of her." He thought and walked back into the forest


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She walked out slowly to her back porch maybe she would see that wolf again. She remember the blue eyes like nothing else.


message 79: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments Jack was hungry. Helping someone was a though job. He tried to find something to eat. But it was to hard. He walked a bit outside the forset to see if he could find something


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She saw a wolf. She walked slowly to the kitchen and got some steak. She walked to the wolf and saw its blue eyes. "thank you here you go." She said and put the steak on the ground.


message 81: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments He picked it up and started to eat it. It teasted good.


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments "I take that as a your welcome." She said.


message 83: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments He looked at her. Still eating the meat. He finished it pretty fast


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She smiled some.


message 85: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments After he had finished the meat he looked at the looked at the forest


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments "You should go to your home." She said. "Maybe you could come and visit."


message 87: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments He looked at her. He lit his head a little


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments "I get lonely." She said. "I just dislocated my leg and sprained my ankle."


message 89: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments He was sitting down and looked up at her face


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She smiled."Go ahead go."


message 91: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments He took a few steps back


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments "Its ok." She said.


message 93: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments He turned around and started to run as fast as he could


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She smiled some. She got up and went back to her house.


message 95: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments He stoped running. He know if the other wolves know this he can get kicked out from the pack


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She walked to her room and closed her eyes and went to bed.

((Do you want to skip to when she is a senior?))


message 97: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments (Yheah)


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments ((ok can you start it off))


message 99: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments Jack was getting ready to go to school. When he was done with getting ready he walked to school. He had his hands in his pockets when he was walking


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She smiled as she got in her short skirt and low cut shirt. She could wear whatever she wanted since she was a cheerleader. She walked in the school smiling.


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