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message 151: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments Jack wanted to run in the forset but he was stuck on a pleace with smelling kids and mean girls.


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She sighed and took a breath. She walked to the office and made announcements about the sport try outs.


message 153: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments Jack was walking around. He was completly lost. He dldn't know were to go


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She walked out of the office. "excuse me um you have all classes with me." She said to him. "If you want to follow me go ahead." She said.


message 155: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments Jack was walking in the corridor trying to find were he need to go. He had tried thinking as a wolf follow the smells. But it noly mabaye fell sick or allmost throw up


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She knew he ignored her. She guessed it was awful to be lonely. She walked away to her class. After this their was cheerleading Practice.


message 157: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments He find the class were he was going to have. He took a seat as far back as he could


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments Those blue eyes haunted her. She wasn't sure where though. Why were they haunting her.


message 159: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments He was sitting and tried to forget all this horrible smells from girls that dosen't know how much perfum they use


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She sat there still thinking about those blue eyes. They seemed so familiar.


message 161: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments He had his hand infront of his nose and was breathing through his mouth


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She got up to go practice after the bell rang. She went to the field. She saw everyone there. "Time for the pyramid." SHe said. She got up on the top. She smiled things were going perfect until someone sneezed. She slipped and started to fall backwards. SHe let out a scream.


message 163: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments Jack had just come to the field when he sees her fall. They mabye haven't been nice to each other. But he couldn't let her fall. He ran as fast as he could and catched her


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She was falling. She saw those blue eyes the wolf. But the new kid wasn't a wolf he was human which made impossible. She closed her eyes tightly and realized she been caught. 'thank you." She whispered trembling.


message 165: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments "You welcome." He said and tried to sound nice.


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She was still holding tight to him. SHe didn't open her eyes. She was scared.


message 167: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments He feel it started to get a little awkward. "Um you can let go of me now." He said and tried to get her of him


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments "Oh sorry." She still didn't open her eyes. She got off of him. She was still trembling some. She needed her inhaler.


message 169: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments Jack took a few steps back. Something made him stay instad of going away


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She was panicking. "Girls my inahler." She whispered.


message 171: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments Jack started to walk away. He know he couldn't do much so he could just walk away and hope this wont be one of those big deals


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She was scared. "Thank you." She took a couple puffs. "I'm fine." She whispered. She wasn't sure though.


message 173: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments He looked at her one last time before he walked of the field


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She was in tears now. "Girls you messed up big time."


message 175: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments He was stavning next to the bleacher. He stood like he was hiding.


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments "Take five." She whispered. "I need to clam down."


message 177: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments Jack was watching he girls from his hiding pleace. He was even listing to what they were talking about


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She took big breaths. She was scared and still panicking.


message 179: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments He felt bad for just standing ther instad of helping her. He rolled his eyes before he walks up to her again. "Are you allright?" He asked


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She looked up. "Yeah I'm not good at these kind of situations I tend to panic my parents say its because I was injured a few years ago but I don't remember much things about it.


message 181: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments "Is it anything I can help you with?" He trid to sound nice to her


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments "No I'm fine." She said knowing he was really didn't care. "I know you don't care we wouldn't want you to be put out of your way to care." She said trying to relax.


message 183: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments "Of you say so." He didn't want to argue with her right now. So he let her be


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She was still not relax. "I'm not ok like I said i have panic issues and there isn't anything no one can do." SHe said.


message 185: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments "I know that. But sometimes it can feel better to talk to someone." He said and had a pretty calm tone


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments "I would talk about but I don't remember much from the accident but blue eyes I think. I'm not sure." She whispered.


message 187: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments "Blue eyes?" He asked and looked at her


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments "Yeah blue eyes." She said looking at him


message 189: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments "Can you tell me more?" He asked. He know what kind of accident she was talking about. He just wanted to see how much she could remember from it


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments "I only remember the blue eyes." She said. She looked at him. "I'm sorry I would tell you but I didn't remember anything else."


message 191: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments "So you don't even remember the accident?" He asked to mane sure what she didn't remember


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments "No not really I remember there was an accident but nothing else to it." She said.


message 193: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments "Okey. Are you feeling better?" He asked. He didn't want to continue with that conversation


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments "Yeah I'm as fine as I'm going to be." She said. She got up from the bench knowing he didn't want to talk to her.


message 195: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments He walked away. He had done what he could. And he know he couldn't do more


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She looked down. He didn't want to be near her and that was ok. She was still freaked out some.


message 197: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments The school was like a prison. He wasn't free like old times. He liked running around in the forest. Hunt food. And just be a wolf.


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She sighed some. She ran up to him. "Hey I'm sorry for being rude this morning."


message 199: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments "I'm sorry to. Everything is new for me." He exused. He know that wasn't the only reason.


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She nodded her head. Her eyes showed something hurt in them. "Yeah its ok." She said. "Thanks for saving me." She whispered.


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