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message 101: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments When Jack came to school he could feel alot of differnet smells. Like girls with alot and lots of perfyum.


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She walked in there with a smile. "Hi." She said to her best friend.

"theres a new guy. And you need a date." She said.

"No I don't" Dana smiled and left and she was walking and didn't pay attention to where she was walked into the new guy name Jack. "Oh sorry." She whispered.


message 103: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments He turned around and looked at her. He recuniced her smell. It was the girl he saved for a long time ago. He didn't say anything


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments "Ok do you have some problem. I said sorry you could at least say oh thats alright." She looked up and saw his blue eyes.


message 105: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments He rolled his eyes. "Don't worry." He said ironicly. "Happy?"


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She looked at him. "You don't have to be a jerk about it. Normally when people say sorry people aren't rude." She said


message 107: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments He rolled his eyes again and walked away. He didn't really want to talk to anyone specily her.


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She looked at him. "YOu have no clue who I am or who your messing with. YOur life will be awful." She said. She walked away. Her hair fell behind her as she walked off.


message 109: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments He wasn't afraid of what she said to him. If she wanted to see an awful life he could show it. She shouldn't mess with him. If he wanted to he could kill her easy. But he was trying to stay cool.


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She told people about him and what he did. They believed her of course. She was the queen of the school. She walked into her first class. She couldn't shake off the feeling of those blue eyes


message 111: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments He walked into the classroom and tried to find somewhere to sit. He had a strange feeling that everyone was looking at him. He didn't like when other payed him to much etntetion


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She saw him in her class. Everyone was order to get up and say their names. She walked to the front. "Hi fellow I'm Dana head cheerleader and flyer." She smiled and sat down. She looked up at him with a smirk. "Don't mess with me." She whispered softly.


message 113: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments He could hear her perfecly. He didn't get bothered of her. What did bother him was all the differnet smells in the room. It made him feel sick


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments "Is my perfume to strong for you?" She said seeing him look sick. "Most people like it but I guessed thats the population who isnt rude or a jerk."


message 115: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments He looked angryly at her and swoled loudly and trying to not throw up


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments "Are you mad." She said. She looked in his eyes. For that one moment she knew those eyes from somewhere.


message 117: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments "Leave me alone." He wispered loudly and angry


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She looked at him. "Don't talk to me like that." She said.


message 119: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments "I talk to you how ever I want." He looked at her angry.


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments "No you will not talk to me like that." She said calmly. "Its rude and mean." She said.


message 121: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments "Dose it looks like I care?" He asked. He put his arms across over his cheast and stared at her


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments "You should because its mean and rude to talk to people like that." She said.


message 123: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments "That's why you should leave me alone. I'm not like the other that follow you like a dog." He said angryly


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She looked at him. "Well at least I don't get pure joy from acting like an animal thats what your acting like right now." Hurt was in her voice and in her eyes.


message 125: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments "Isn't that what you are used to? See animals follow you becaouse you think you are special." He feel like he could do something horrible to her. Something that could make her regret all the things she said to him


message 126: by onceuponatimeareview (last edited Jun 19, 2014 04:21PM) (new)

onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments "You must be really upset this school isn't animals these people like me and are nice to me. They don't have to follow me.' She said. "At least we don't act like animals."


message 127: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments "Humans are animals. And if you can't see it they are following you. Like a pack of wolves are following thier leader." He said. His voice was a bit calm but still angry


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She looked at him. "We aren't animals they don't have to like I said. I know everyone here and we are all friends." SHe paused. "One thing we have in common as wolves is that we are loyal and we won't let others hurt each other like your doing right now but at least we don't hurt each other and act like a stupid dog."


message 129: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments "Mabye they are. But they do fight with each other to." It was easy for him with all this wolf talk. He had loved with them in his entire life


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She looked at him. "Well this school doesnt like jerks and freaks like you. Who like treating people poorly."


message 131: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments "Well I don't think they would like pepole tell lies about other pepole either." He said with an little grin on his face


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments "Like what that your rude an mean." She said. "Thats what I said. Are you telling me that is not true?" She said. she paused. "You know what its not like your proving me wrong." She said.


message 133: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments "I was trying to prove that you had said things behind my back. But you said the truth on your own." He did a short break. "Besides. I know you have said more things then that I was just rude and mean. Heve you ever been thinking on that you are saying mean things about someone you don't even know." He said and tried to make her feel guilty


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments SHe looked at him. "I didn't say anything else other than that." She said. "YOu may hear things from my friends, but I didn't say anything else."


message 135: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments He crossed his arms and raised an elbow. It was ovious the he said really but with his eyes. He had allways been good with talking with his eyes. Even as a wolf


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments "Don't believe me but most deliquants like yourself don't deserve a second chance." She said.


message 137: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments "As you wish." He says angry


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She looked at him and got up from her seat. She looked in his eyes. "Don't treat me like that at all. Its mean and rude. And as I say they don't have to follow me." She said.


message 139: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments "Wait wait wait. Now you think I'm mean and rude if I leave you alone?" He asked and looked a little suprised


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments "Your being mean and rude to me the way you say things to me.' She said.


message 141: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments Jack was tierd of all this. He wanted to end this now. He walked up closer to her. And looked her right in the eye. "Leave me alone or bad thing will happen." He wispered and then he walked and took a seat as far back as he could come


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She looked at him with hurt look. "Fine then you won't be left alone because this school doesnt like your kind." She said.


message 143: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments He looked at her with an cold look


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She looked at him."And you call me the jerk and the cruel person your the one who is hurting me and the other peoples."


message 145: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments "I never called you jerk or crule. You did just do that yourself." He said. He's look was still ice cold


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She looked at him. She was hurt. "But I'm not cruel or a jerk." She said.She looked down sadly. "Fine I guess your going to be a lonely person." She said.


message 147: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments "I can live with that." He said. The closest he could talk to was the wolvles. But he liked walking alone


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments "I just want to be your friend thats why I said sorry." She whispered and walked out of the classroom no one stopped her.


message 149: by Lou (new)

Lou (louiseem) | 16867 comments He looked away. He was pretty mad after what she did


onceuponatimeareview | 5047 comments She was so curious about it. He had the same the blue eyes.


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