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message 151: by Philip (new)

Philip Whiteland | 3394 comments Josiah and Archibald are having to share a car, and some insights!

https://www.abctales.com/story/philwh...


message 152: by Philip (new)

Philip Whiteland | 3394 comments New 'Undertakers' story in which Archibald finds the government's strictures exhausting, and dangerous!

https://www.abctales.com/story/philwh...


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Alicia Ehrhardt (aliciabutcherehrhardt) | 4836 comments Poor Archibald. Made to annoy his employer. Without the sense God gave chickens.

Thanks for the story. Very timely.


message 154: by Philip (new)

Philip Whiteland | 3394 comments Alicia wrote: "Poor Archibald. Made to annoy his employer. Without the sense God gave chickens.

Thanks for the story. Very timely."


Yes, it turned out to be more topical than I expected :-)
I wouldn't pity Archibald too much, I suspect he has a sound grounding in common sense.


message 155: by Alicia (new)

Alicia Ehrhardt (aliciabutcherehrhardt) | 4836 comments He wants things to make sense - to him, where he is.

Which is not unreasonable, if you hope to acquire his cooperation on something.

Some of us are too clever for our own good.


message 156: by Philip (new)

Philip Whiteland | 3394 comments Alicia wrote: "He wants things to make sense - to him, where he is.

Which is not unreasonable, if you hope to acquire his cooperation on something.

Some of us are too clever for our own good."


You may well be right, Alicia :-)


message 157: by Philip (new)

Philip Whiteland | 3394 comments Josiah and Archibald discuss leadership qualities:

https://www.abctales.com/story/philwh...


message 158: by Jim (new)

Jim | 21809 comments love it


message 159: by Philip (last edited Jul 19, 2020 03:15AM) (new)

Philip Whiteland | 3394 comments Jim wrote: "love it"

I'm chuffed! Didn't know if this one would work as it's not so explicitly humorous :-)

Mind you, it did get a Cherry Award within minutes of it being posted!!


message 160: by Jim (new)

Jim | 21809 comments That's good


message 161: by Philip (new)

Philip Whiteland | 3394 comments Jim wrote: "That's good"

Isn't it! Just need to persuade a few more readers to take a chance on the book, now :-)

http://getbook.at/ADubiousUndertaking


message 162: by Philip (new)

Philip Whiteland | 3394 comments A new Undertakers' story in which Josiah has an unpleasant duty to perform and Archibald finds himself in trouble!

https://www.abctales.com/story/philwh...


message 163: by Jim (new)

Jim | 21809 comments nice one :-)


message 164: by Philip (new)

Philip Whiteland | 3394 comments Jim wrote: "nice one :-)"

Part 2 later today. The beauty of this one is that it utilises my former career (HR not undertaking) :-)


message 165: by Philip (new)

Philip Whiteland | 3394 comments Part 2 of Grave Expectations:

https://www.abctales.com/story/philwh...


message 166: by Jim (new)

Jim | 21809 comments love it


message 167: by Philip (new)

Philip Whiteland | 3394 comments Jim wrote: "love it"

Thanks. You couldn't clone yourself, could you Jim? I could do with a few more of you ;-)


message 168: by Philip (new)

Philip Whiteland | 3394 comments Josiah and Archibald discuss a burning desire!

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message 169: by Jim (new)

Jim | 21809 comments nice one :-)


message 170: by Philip (new)

Philip Whiteland | 3394 comments Jim wrote: "nice one :-)"

:-)


message 171: by Philip (new)

Philip Whiteland | 3394 comments The sequel to the Murgatroyds' funeral arrangements in 'Never Say Die!'

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message 172: by Jim (new)

Jim | 21809 comments Nice one :-)


message 173: by Philip (new)

Philip Whiteland | 3394 comments Jim wrote: "Nice one :-)"

Thanks Jim! The original plan had been to mention the Murgatroyds' funeral arrangements in passing, then it somehow became a whole other story! I'm not sure how that happened :-)


message 174: by Philip (new)

Philip Whiteland | 3394 comments This may be more than flesh and blood can stand! ;-)

Me talking about the new audio version of Steady Past Your Granny's

https://youtu.be/AI_ic0uWa4k


message 175: by Jim (new)

Jim | 21809 comments Philip wrote: "Jim wrote: "Nice one :-)"

Thanks Jim! The original plan had been to mention the Murgatroyds' funeral arrangements in passing, then it somehow became a whole other story! I'm not sure how that happ..."


the best ones happen like that
I had a novella come out of a throw away line :-)


message 176: by Philip (new)

Philip Whiteland | 3394 comments Jim wrote: "Philip wrote: "Jim wrote: "Nice one :-)"

Thanks Jim! The original plan had been to mention the Murgatroyds' funeral arrangements in passing, then it somehow became a whole other story! I'm not sur..."


I'm not sure if I've got the staying power for a novella! I tend to peak too soon ;-)


message 177: by Jim (new)

Jim | 21809 comments I suspect that one thing that might work for you is to have the separate stories but as people read them they slowly see how there is an overriding story emerging.

If you look at the last three Tallis stories, I've called them a love story. But the first three don't appear to be linked at all, it's when the last two come out that things will fall into place.
It's not subtle or sophisticated and it's not even tricky. But I can imagine you could work something nice with your undertakers.

I can see, in the background, Electra and 'Me Mam' wrestling for control of Archibald with poor old Josiah caught in the middle a bit and trying to do his best for the lad
In the foreground you just have a string of stories but with growing hints as to what is going on :-)


message 178: by Philip (new)

Philip Whiteland | 3394 comments Jim wrote: "I suspect that one thing that might work for you is to have the separate stories but as people read them they slowly see how there is an overriding story emerging.

If you look at the last three Ta..."


Good advice and definite food for thought! Thanks Jim :-)


message 179: by Jim (new)

Jim | 21809 comments :-)


message 180: by Philip (new)

Philip Whiteland | 3394 comments The latest from Josiah and Archibald :-)

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message 181: by Jim (new)

Jim | 21809 comments love it :-)


message 182: by Philip (new)

Philip Whiteland | 3394 comments Jim wrote: "love it :-)"

We aim to please ;-)


message 183: by Philip (new)

Philip Whiteland | 3394 comments A digital Granny, no less!

https://youtu.be/D9cNxhAZQ8Y


message 184: by Jim (new)

Jim | 21809 comments selling spam perhaps?


Rosemary (grooving with the Picts) (nosemanny) | 8590 comments Did they strike here too?


message 186: by Philip (new)

Philip Whiteland | 3394 comments Rosemary (grooving with the Picts) wrote: "Did they strike here too?"

Sorry for this everyone, it didn't occur to me that it would look like one of those awful spam posts! Just as well I've got Jim to keep me on the straight and narrow :-)

For the avoidance of doubt, this is a video about the new digital download option for Steady Past Your Granny's by Philip Whiteland


message 187: by Philip (new)

Philip Whiteland | 3394 comments Josiah and Archibald are back!

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message 188: by Jim (new)

Jim | 21809 comments and nicely done :-)


message 189: by Philip (new)

Philip Whiteland | 3394 comments Jim wrote: "and nicely done :-)"

Thanks Jim. One more story to go in this particular 'narrative arc', if I've got the term right ;-)


message 190: by Jim (new)

Jim | 21809 comments I suspect you have :-)


message 191: by Philip (new)

Philip Whiteland | 3394 comments Jim wrote: "I suspect you have :-)"

Having had 'Measure for Measure?' I'm tempted to go for 'All's Well That Ends Well?'

After all, if you're going to steal at all, you should steal from the greatest :-)


message 192: by Jim (new)

Jim | 21809 comments Philip wrote: "Jim wrote: "I suspect you have :-)"

Having had 'Measure for Measure?' I'm tempted to go for 'All's Well That Ends Well?'

After all, if you're going to steal at all, you should steal from the grea..."


if they're the greatest it's not theft, it's homage :-)


message 193: by Philip (new)

Philip Whiteland | 3394 comments Jim wrote: "Philip wrote: "Jim wrote: "I suspect you have :-)"

Having had 'Measure for Measure?' I'm tempted to go for 'All's Well That Ends Well?'

After all, if you're going to steal at all, you should stea..."


Of course!


message 194: by Philip (new)

Philip Whiteland | 3394 comments The final story in the current series in which Josiah's plans come to fruition, and Archibald's come crashing down!

https://www.abctales.com/story/philwh...


message 195: by Philip (new)

Philip Whiteland | 3394 comments Nothing to do with blogs, but I can't find my 'Meet the Author' thread!

For publication on Sunday, 30th August and available for pre-order now at the introductory price of just 99p!

http://getbook.at/graveexpectations


Rosemary (grooving with the Picts) (nosemanny) | 8590 comments It's here https://www.goodreads.com/topic/show/...

Perhaps should be retitled Lost but not gone. ;)


message 197: by Jim (new)

Jim | 21809 comments Rosemary (grooving with the Picts) wrote: "It's here https://www.goodreads.com/topic/show/...

Perhaps should be retitled Lost but not gone. ;)"


LOL


message 198: by Philip (new)

Philip Whiteland | 3394 comments Rosemary (grooving with the Picts) wrote: "It's here https://www.goodreads.com/topic/show/...

Perhaps should be retitled Lost but not gone. ;)"


You've got a point, Rosemary! Thanks for finding it :-)


message 199: by Philip (new)

Philip Whiteland | 3394 comments A bit about the Undertakers books and a link to a video in which I read the title story:

https://www.goodreads.com/author_blog...


message 200: by Alicia (new)

Alicia Ehrhardt (aliciabutcherehrhardt) | 4836 comments I am enjoying the Undertakers. And appreciating that the relationship is familial - so he can't just afford to get rid of the clueless assistant.


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